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I remember reading that 19th Century authors, like Charles Dickens, published some of their most famous novels serially in newspapers and magazines. Dickens is rather famous for it, but I’ll bet many people don’t know how common this was, and also what great works of literature were published this way.
It turns out an astonishing number of literary giants published some of their best known works in monthly or weekly installments. It’s incredible to realize that Tolstoy rolled out War and Peace this way. Dostoevsky published Crime and Punishment chapter by chapter. Even Robert Louis Stevenson’s Treasure Island and Conan Doyle’s Sherlock Holmes stories were published this way. Alexandre Dumas serialized The Three Musketeers and The Count of Monte Cristo.
Wilkie Collins, Thomas Hardy, Victor Hugo, Harriet Beecher Stowe, and Henry James were doing the same. Imagine reading War and Peace one chapter at a time for months and months (and months.)
If it was good enough for them, well…
So here’s my experiment. If I follow in the modern footsteps of Hugh Howey, will people read my work? I hope so.
The first two episodes of The Hazard Trade are now live on Amazon’s Kindle store. Every month or so you’ll be able to read the next installment. You can read Kindle books on literally almost every device – including a web browser. So don’t fret if you don’t have a Kindle Reader Device. I read all my books on my phone (with the font size UP and the background Black with White Text) using the Kindle Reader app.
Since these are such small time investments, each chapter is aiming between 7,000 and 10,000 words (to make the investment worthwhile) at $0.99 a pop – I hope you’ll give it a whirl.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0G3XYC8JK
I’m aiming to publish these monthly, and since I’m writing as we go, you have a great opportunity to give me feedback as we move forward. And as always – the best gift you can give to an author is a positive review on Amazon and Goodreads. I hope you’ll enjoy.
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Eric
My short story, Sally Braid is free on Amazon for ONE MORE DAY!
Please get your free copy now. It hit number 3 in Sea Adventure Fiction today. And you can add an audiobook version for just $1.99!

I wrote the first version of Sally Braid in graduate school, and rewrote it just a few years ago. Below is the new Afterword that I just added to it, should be live in the eBook version later today or tomorrow.
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I had been a commercial boat captain during the summers, all through college and graduate school. I drove launch tenders, boats that take people from shore out to their boats on moorings and anchors, in Newport, Rhode Island. The launches were 26 feet long, could take about 20 passengers. It was an amazing summer job, one where I learned not only how to handle boats incredibly well, but where I learned a lot about people. I drove the launch in all sorts of conditions, including once in a hurricane (without any passengers.)
One night in early September before going to graduate school, I was tied up at the dock while an unforecasted squall came through, much like what Tess experienced. During the peak of the storm, with lightning striking all around the harbor, I got a call on the radio from the Harbor Master. He was trying to rescue a boat that had broken loose when the squall line came through. He was a young guy, a junior Harbor Master, and had very little experience towing boats, and was getting dragged towards the rocks at the Ida Lewis Yacht Club. I reluctantly left the dock in 50 knots of wind, with driving rain, lightning and thunder going off all around me.
It was the first time in my life that I was so close to lightning strikes. The hairs on my arms were standing up with static electricity just before the lightning strikes. The air was lasing purple, and I saw St. Elmo’s Fire, the corona effect ahead of lightning strikes, on tall boat masts around me. The sound of the thunder was so loud that I felt it in my chest, the only other time I’ve felt anything like that was being close to fireworks going off. I imagine it must be similar to be in artillery fire. My 57 year old brain thinks my 23 year old self was a moron for going out, but the memory of the panicked, pleading sound of the Harbor Master’s voice reminds me that I needed to go.
When I got to the Harbor Master, he had caught a 70 foot classic wooden yacht that had broken loose from its mooring. He had tied off too far forward on the boat and couldn’t stop it from dragging. I tied off properly on the other side of the boat, and I got the yacht under control. As I tied the launch off, a wave came up and went right down the front of my foul weather gear, and my only thought was that the ocean water was so warm, much warmer than the air and rain.
We got the boat across the harbor and tied off on another mooring. The Harbor Master thanked me and said he owed me a beer. I told him he owed me his firstborn child.
Tess is an amalgam of several of my customers, but two in particular. One was a woman who was as hard as nails, an avid sailor who had Olympic aspirations in her twenties, but never made it. She sailed with her husband on their yacht, racing all over New England. Everyone thought it was her husband who was the great sailor, and they won a lot of races. In reality, while he ‘drove’ the boat, it was his wife who was the tactician and navigator, and really ‘ran’ the boat. I asked her once if it bothered her that nobody realized that she ran the boat, and she smiled an uncharacteristic smile, but didn’t answer. They were in their fifties, about my parents’ age at the time. To me they were an older couple, but were actually younger than I am right now. Time changes perspectives.
I had another customer who was Tess’s age, in her seventies, who had lost her husband the previous year. She had spent decades on their boat, a classic wooden trawler, which her husband had meticulously maintained. But she herself always relied on her husband to take care of everything. She barely knew how to drive the boat, and didn’t know how to turn on the engines, run the generator, didn’t understand about bilge pumps, charging the batteries, or that the refrigerator on her boat shouldn’t be left on while on the mooring without shore power.
One night when I was driving by, I noticed that the boat was very low in the water. I knocked on the hull and she came out. We realized the batteries were dead, and the bilge pump was not running. Like many old wooden boats, she had a tiny leak around the shaft that the bilge pump normally kept up with easily. But since the batteries were dead, the pump wasn’t running and the boat was slowly sinking. I helped her start the generator, and showed her how the different battery switches controlled where the power went, from which batteries. All very mundane stuff, but rather critical to understand when living on a mooring.
She was very sweet and sad, and the launch drivers took her under our wing and helped her out with everything. By the second week on the mooring she had learned every hard lesson she needed to learn about what not to do. Undaunted, she stayed on the boat all summer long, into the Fall. She slowly became more confident. One evening when it was very quiet and slow, she invited me swing by for dinner and I tied the launch up next to her boat and we talked for a bit.
As we ate, I asked her why she’d decided to stay on the boat that summer, and she got very quiet, and shyly said, “It’s the only place I still see him.” The hairs on my arms went up, just like they did that time from St. Elmo’s Fire.
I’m so excited to tell you about the new audiobooks I released this week. You can get audio versions of any of my books via Amazon or Audible.
Legacy of the Bitterroots is below:
https://www.audible.com/pd/B0FP5RT618?source_code=ASSORAP0511160006&share_location=pdp

Giveaway ends September 17, 2025.
See the giveaway details at Goodreads.

“Legacy of the Bitterroots” is doing really well on Amazon Kindle right now. Since it’s available this week for free as an eBook download, I’m in a special category “Kindle Free Store”.
I’m #2 in Mystery, Thriller & Suspense Literary Fiction, #4 in Historical Literary Fiction, and #9 in Historical Mystery, Thriller & Suspense Fiction.
It would be awesome if I was at those numbers outside of the “free” category! But I’ll take it as it comes! Thanks to everyone who has taken advantage of the free download. And if you haven’t, please do so this week before the price goes up to $5.99. This is in celebration of the launch of the print book, which went live on Monday.
Also – if you like it, please, please do give it a review. The best way to help a debut author is to give it a “Purchase Verified” review of the book. I’m at 13 5-star reviews. If I can get to 25 things get really interesting. Any help deeply appreciated!
Yay for this small win! I’ll take it!

Legacy of the Bitterroots
Picard, Eric
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I stayed up for several nights working on the cover design. Once a designer, always a designer, I guess. I’m disproportionately pleased with the way it came out.
I lost days of sleep over the last few months working on the manuscript with my editor, Andy. He kept finding places where I hadn’t invested ahead of time in the payoff. The backstory was clear in my head, but hadn’t made it onto the page.
Many times writing this novel, I felt chills. A few times I teared up. But going back to write a few of these earlier scenes after the fact, I broke down sobbing. That’s when I knew the characters had become real for me.
I started writing this book—actually writing words—in 2020 when I found myself unemployed during COVID. The two job offers I’d been verbally given the same week, March of 2020, evaporated as the world suddenly realized how screwy things were going to become.
I started working on this book way back around the turn of the century. I’d awoken from a dream. I’d been hiking in the woods and come across a village from the turn of the previous century, abandoned but perfectly preserved.
As I wandered the village, looking into abandoned and dusty storefronts filled with unsold goods, I wondered what had happened. A man hailed me from the distance. He was elderly. He was the caretaker of the village and welcomed me. He said he’d inherited it from his father, who’d inherited it from his father before him. That it was a boom town during a gold rush, but that when the gold played out, the people left.
I woke up confused. And intrigued. It was one of those dreams that really stuck with me, fishing hooks firmly embedded in my brain. I started thinking about how a perfectly preserved village like that could be turned into a theme park of some kind. I called my friend, Gary, who was working at Disney, and we talked about the idea for several hours. I was enthusiastic and excited but felt weird, like Gary must have thought I was nuts. He played along, at the very least.
I kept thinking about this idea over the years. I’d written most of a novella in graduate school—80 pages or so falling out of me like water from a hose. But I felt like it was too derivative and abandoned it for 30 years. That novella became Frost, which I published last year after dusting it off and rewriting it.
I knew I was capable of writing a novel. I’d written several short stories, plus the unfinished Frost. But if I was going to take time off from a busy career and family to write a novel, I was going to really put in the work. I just never felt like I had the time or extra energy I knew it would take to turn this idea into a novel.
Years went by.
In 2016 I was driving across the country with my wife. We were on the highway in Montana, and a small sign caught my attention. It read “Garnet Ghost Town” with an arrow pointing to a dirt road off the four-lane undivided highway.
I pointed it out to Erynn, and she said, “Let’s do it.” I almost flipped the Honda Pilot, turning onto the dirt road at highway speed. We drove into the woods for way too long. Every time we got to the point of giving up, we’d come to a crossroad that had another sign. After almost an hour, thinking we were driving into a trap set by meth-heads, we came upon Garnet. It’s amazing. The best-preserved ghost town in the U.S., according to their sign.
We spent a few hours wandering Garnet. It’s truly incredible. And right then, the novel went beyond fishing hooks and was metaphorically more like a bone graft.
Years went by.
I was introduced to Hugh Howey by a mutual friend. I’d read his book Wool and was a huge fan. Hugh hosted a meetup in Seattle, where I lived at the time, for writers. I went, even though I hadn’t written anything besides a few hundred trade articles and some essays in previous decades. Hugh was very gracious, despite my fanboy intrusion amongst the working writers.
We connected—at least I connected—over a shared background working in our 20s as boat captains. He’s a bit younger than me, but our timeframes overlapped, and we knew a few people in common.
When he asked what I was working on, I gave him my job description. He laughed. He said, “No, what are you writing?” I was a bit embarrassed. I explained that while I was writing hundreds of pages of content a month, most of it was strategy or vision papers and product specifications. And the rest was trade articles. I was writing two monthly columns at the time.
He looked a bit uncomfortable, and I said, “Well, I have a mostly finished novella that I started in grad school. And I’ve got this crazy story that’s had its hooks in me for years, and eventually I’ll write it.”
He looked both relieved and interested. “What’s it about?”
So I told him about it. He said something polite and, of course, encouraged me to write it. He was in high demand, and I’d taken up more time than I should have, and he was whisked off by another writer.
So a few years later, when I suddenly had some time, I realized there were no excuses. It was time to write the novel I’d been putting off for 20 years.
I quickly learned that my history degree was both a blessing and a curse when writing a historical novel. Frost fell out of me with very little effort—it was like breathing. Writing the historical sections of Legacy was a slog. I probably spent five to ten hours researching for every hour I wrote. It wasn’t unpleasant—I love researching history. It was, however, a lot of effort. Months were going by, and I was uncovering more historical mysteries and opportunities for every one that I incorporated into the story.
It felt like serendipity—and panic. I saw that the four months that I’d allocated to getting this book done were not going to be nearly enough. It makes me laugh to read that sentence right now, because I had so hilariously misunderstood how long this was going to take. The modern storyline was easy; I wrote each of those chapters in a day or two, but the historical sections were becoming interminable. I was a bit panicky because I needed to find a job. But COVID giveth and COVID taketh away, and I soldiered on.
Ultimately I was nowhere near done, stuck on the chapter where the executives from Yomohiro Corporation visited Idaho, when I did ultimately get a job. And things slowed way down. Each time I picked up the book, I had to reread what I’d already written to get back into the pace, and it was a self-reinforcing loop; as I wrote more, it took longer to pick the threads back up each time.
Finally, after more than two years, I had another break from work. I took that three months and made huge progress, but then got another job. Another two years, and I left that role and began consulting full time. This has turned out to be perfect, as I’m working about 50% of my time, and the rest has been used for writing and then editing.
This novel is a bit of a beast. It is a multi-generational saga that is nonlinear, meaning the modern story is interleaved with the historical story. I have a lot of literary friends, and a lot who are avid readers, so I got really valuable feedback from both groups. Some feedback that I got was that there were too many characters to keep straight. This was mostly because each of the stories had a full cast of characters, and the historical story stretched from 1867 to 1910 and involved founding and growing an entire village.
About eight months ago, I decided to disentangle the two stories and publish them as two linear books. So I dove into the historical story and treated it like an exercise in fleshing out a novel. There was a lot that it needed to stand on its own, and it was all valuable content that furthered the story.
I pulled in several new readers who had never touched the original interleaved story, and the feedback was universal that it was well written and a good story—but that it seemed like it was missing something important. And it was.
I’d never written the historical sections as a standalone—they were designed such that there was a slow build in the historical sections toward things that were revealed in the modern sections. Together, they were whole, but separately, they were incomplete.
I finally realized that there weren’t too many characters—at least not in service of the story I was writing. They just needed more room to breathe and to be complete beings. So in the exercise of writing each book to be standalone, I fleshed those characters out to the point where they were three-dimensional. And after a good friend—who had been an original reader, and then a reader on the standalone historical novel—told me he thought it needed to be welded back together…
By this point, the combined stories landed around 130,000 words. Which already is a lot. After a lot of thinking and discussions with other readers, I realized he was correct. And I welded the two stories back together.
I finally was at the point where I felt like the book was “done,” or at least whole. I reached out to a very close friend who is also a professional editor, Andrea Lorenzo Molinari. He had the time available to help, and he came on board as my official editor.
Andy is awesome. He was coming to this story—that I felt was complete—with fresh eyes. He started asking me some hard questions about various characters and scenes, and as we completed the first rounds of edits, I had a whole list of new scenes that needed to be added. Thanks be to Andy, because he was so right! The book really needed those additional scenes to be complete.
So that’s the whole story about the story—the saga of the creation of Crystal Village and the characters that inhabit the place. I hope you enjoy the book.
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Below is a preview of my upcoming Novel, Legacy of the Bitterroots – A Crystal Village Tale. Please take a read, and I hope you’ll consider buying it when it is released.
The horse screamed. Artillery fire had torn open her belly. Her cry was not a whinny or a battle cry — it was like a woman’s shriek of agony. Through smoke-choked air, horses thrashed in blood-soaked mud, broken legs jutting at impossible angles, heads twisting as they writhed. One stood trembling, entrails hanging to the ground, steaming in the cold morning air. A dozen horses screamed across the battlefield, their combined agony drowning out the clash of bayonets and the shouting of men.
Hank jolted awake, his shirt soaked with sweat despite the mountain chill. He drew in the clean mountain air. It was crisp and fresh in his lungs, clearing the lingering stench of death. The screaming of horses was the worst sound he’d ever heard. Nobody spoke of it. Nobody could bear to. It was the true sound of war.
He shifted on the damp ground, heart still hammering in his chest, and tried to fall back asleep.
Hank wiggled his shoulder to find a spot without roots or rocks. He adjusted his blanket against the cold. Their hand-drawn map showed a few more days of walking to reach the claim. His brother Barney slept on the other side of the fire. They’d traveled five days out of Missoula Mills in Montana. The trip had been hard but beautiful.
They’d come west seeking gold at the invitation of childhood friend Joe Welch, who had served with them in the war. Joe’s package contained gold dust and a garnet the size of a man’s thumb, valued at ten dollars by their neighborhood jeweler. This wasn’t a gold rush or a stampede—Joe had found a secluded claim far from prying eyes. The claim sat a week’s hike beyond Missoula Mills, the last trace of civilization for a hundred miles. Joe had invited them and a few others to stake nearby claims. He sought companionship and safety. Though always jovial, he had wandered west after the war to quiet his demons. His letter arrived with an admonition of secrecy, and Hank agreed.
When the package from Joe arrived, Barney’s wife Madeleine pulled Hank into the pantry and clutched his arm.
“Hank, you know how he is. I dearly love the man, but he lacks the resolve to see such ventures through. I cannot bear the thought of him setting out without you by his side. He’ll charge ahead until he meets the first obstacle, and then return here, penniless and bereft of prospects,” Madeleine said, her eyes full of panic.
Hank sighed. “Maddy, I kept watch over him during the war, true enough. But he’s my elder brother, and I’ve not yet set my own affairs in order. I’ve no wish to embark on an escapade with Barney and Joe, only to find ourselves back here by autumn with nothing to show for it.”
Madeleine met his gaze with a fixed stare. “Hank. You are in disarray. You scarcely rest, barely eat, and you’ve grown gaunt. Chicago won’t mend what ails you. You need this more than Barney does. With you to guide him, I’m confident he’ll find his way back to me unharmed and with enough savings that we may cease relying on my father’s support. You may be a year his junior, but you are the steady hand we rely on. I beg you — go with him.”
Hank rolled onto his back and stared up through the pine boughs. The sky blazed with more stars than he’d ever seen in Chicago. The Milky Way flowed overhead like a river of light. He’d seen more shooting stars on this trip than in all his life. He and Barney had prepared well, pooling their resources to buy two mules and supplies in Missoula Mills. One mule pulled their two-wheeled pack cart; the other was heavily laden.
They’d served in the cavalry together — Hank as a Lieutenant, Barney as corporal. Hank had led his men to victory after victory, earning praise from command. But the war still gripped his mind — his days filled with a constant barrage of sounds, smells, and intrusive thoughts. Barney chattered endlessly about the war, as if only good memories had been created during their service. Hank had agreed to this journey hoping that distance might quiet his haunted sleep.
He rolled over, trying to sleep again. The next thing he knew, low morning light was in his eyes. Barney snored on the far side of the fire. A red squirrel sat on a branch, staring at him with bright eyes as it demolished a pinecone. Hank stood and stretched, groaning as pain shot up from a rock that had dug into his spine. The squirrel chittered and flung the rest of the pinecone at his head.
Hank reached for the pot of coffee they’d left to brew overnight on a flat rock in the fire. He poured a cup and took a sip, it was acrid but warm. He crossed to the other side of the fire and held the cup under Barney’s mustache. After a moment, Barney snorted, shuffled in his sleep, and his eyes popped open. He sat up as Hank walked back to the other side of the fire, set his tin coffee cup down, and packed his bedroll. Barney crab-walked to the fire and poured himself a cup. He was balding, with a large handlebar mustache, his face darkened by days of beard growth.
After a quick breakfast, they loaded the mules and returned to the trail. Barney led Bertha, while Hank guided Jim with the cart. The cart held enough supplies to last a winter — Hank’s insistence over Barney’s protests of extravagance. But Hank had always led, and Barney had always followed, and that was true long before the war.
They walked the Mullan Military Road, cut by Mullan and his crew less than a decade earlier. Though thousands crowded this route at times, it was quiet this year. Near noon, both mules snorted and grew restless. A horse approached from ahead to the west. Without speaking, the brothers moved to the trail’s edge and steadied the animals. The Mullan Road was safer than most — unlike the Bannock Road, where more than a hundred murders had taken place last year — but desperate men wandered the West since the war’s end. Caution ruled every encounter.
Hank and Barney passed a few travelers in either direction and made sure even the hard men gave them space. They’d seen plenty of action in the war and weren’t easily intimidated. Both carried well-used Colt Army revolvers, worn openly and well maintained. Their dress marked them as former soldiers, though they didn’t display Union colors as some did. In the wilderness, a former Confederate who hadn’t let go of 1865 might be easily provoked. Still, their Army revolvers were a clear signal that they had once served the Union. More often than not, ex-Confederates carried Navy revolvers.
Hank pulled his new Winchester Model 1866 rifle from the rifle scabbard mounted to the front of Jim’s cart. Barney drew his scattergun from its place on Bertha. They kept both barrels aimed at the ground. A few minutes later, a man rode up, slowed his horse, and stood off twenty feet up the trail. Seeing that Hank and Barney were well-armed and ready, he slowly took his hand off his sidearm and politely showed his hands.
“Howdy, friends,” he said. “Road clear ahead?”
Hank met his eyes and gave a single nod. “Been a good stretch from Missoula Mills. Not much mud. No trouble.”
The rider nodded back. “Quiet here, too. Bit of mud in the lowlands. I passed some Nez Perce horse traders near Lake Coeur d’Alene — they were peaceable. Spent the night at the Cataldo Mission. Padre was friendly, he gave me a free warm meal and a clean bed.”
“Much obliged,” Hank said. “You get down that way, stop in on Frank Worden in Missoula Mills. Fair trader. Keeps good stock.”
The man tipped his hat and edged past them. “Good luck to you.”
The Mullan Military Road had been a godsend. After crossing Lookout Pass yesterday, they knew this morning they’d leave it behind for two days of hard hiking into the mountains. They’d counted miles from the pass, watching for a campsite marked with a hidden cart-wide trail heading north. Near mid morning they found it, a tree marked above head height with an underlined double X and an arrow pointing the way. Barney checked their father’s pocket watch, it was just before ten o’clock. With no one in sight and the morning having been uneventful, they watered the mules and left the road.
The trail barely took the cart. Sometimes they pushed from behind; other times Bertha helped Jim pull over tangled roots, rocks, or through patches of mud. Tall trees closed in as they followed Nine Mile Creek deeper into the mountains. By late afternoon they reached a fork, where past travelers had left a fire pit and a flat spot for camping. They settled in for the night.
Hank woke Barney in his usual way — waving coffee under his nose. The air was cold but clear, and the dew wasn’t too bad on their blankets or gear. They’d staked the mules in a grassy patch the night before. The animals had grazed contentedly, and the creek ran close enough for the animals to drink their fill. After gathering up their gear, the brothers ate cold beans from the night before and started uphill.
By noon, they had crossed two mountain passes, still dotted with snow, and continued following creek beds and gulches toward their destination. That evening, they camped on the banks of the Coeur d’Alene River.
The river churned with snowmelt. The cold struck like a knife when they crossed, stealing breath and burning skin. Even the mules shuddered, steam rising from their flanks as they climbed out. They tracked east along the bank, boots squelching, until the trail demanded another crossing.
A few miles later, they found the small tributary marked on their map and left the Coeur d’Alene. After another mile, they took a hard left, climbing again into the mountains along another branching creek. Despite the freezing crossings and the sweat that followed, they made good time. The trail rose steadily, and the ground turned dry and sandy.
After a few miles of hiking they found a small tributary creek Joe had marked on their map and turned left into the mountains. The ground grew drier and sandy. They entered a ghost forest where fire had swept through. The lower trunks of the pines were scorched black, and the underbrush had burned away. Passage was decidedly easier here, though the air still held the memory of flame, and their boot soles soon blackened with ash. New growth pushed through the charred soil — like tiny, green fingers reaching for light.
In the mid-afternoon, the forest changed. Ancient cedars rose around them, their massive trunks like church columns. Shafts of sunlight pierced the canopy far above, casting golden pools on the cathedral floor. The air was still, heavy with the scent of cedar bark. Their voices dropped to respectful whispers, as if they’d entered a sacred space.
They continued to spot the underlined XX marks with arrows and knew they were still on track. One mark read: XX 3 Mi. They forged ahead, and soon the trail leveled out, opening onto an acre of cleared, flat pasture. A rough pen stood to one side, holding several donkeys and a mule. Beyond it stretched a flat meadow, about a mile long and curving out about a mile wide, before the mountain rose again.
The trail ended abruptly at a graveled outcrop. Hank’s breath caught as the land fell away before them — revealing a ravine that plunged easily 100 feet to a ribbon of silver water. To their left, the mountain face rose sheer and towering, a fortress wall of stone sparsely dotted with firs clinging to the near vertical cliffside.
Across the chasm lay something extraordinary: a hidden valley cupped in the mountain’s palm. Spring-fed streams laced across the meadowland, catching the afternoon light before cascading into the ravine in delicate falls. The cove of land stretched two miles wide and deep, a perfect amphitheater of green bounded by granite peaks.
The isolation was complete. No trail led here except the one they’d followed. No eyes had seen this place save those Joe had trusted with his secret. Hank felt something shift in his chest — not peace, exactly, but possibility.
Two cabins stood down in the valley beside separate creeks, set back about a half mile from the ravine’s edge. Near one, a man bent over a sluice, working his claim. Barney put his fingers to his mouth and whistled, sharp and loud. The man straightened, shading his eyes, then waved. He rang a small bell, its sound carrying faintly across the open air as he signaled the other cabin.
While they waited, they dropped their packs and unloaded the mules, releasing them into the pen with the others. The new animals and old exchanged brays and snorts. Hank now understood why Joe had asked for some of the items on their list — especially the pulley system and baskets, clearly meant for shuttling gear across the ravine.
A few minutes later, Joe appeared on the far side and hailed them with a shout. They called back, grinning, and watched him scramble across the rope bridge — though Hank felt “bridge” was too generous a word for the contraption.
Joe hugged them both in his bear-like grip. He was a big man: barrel-chested, thick-bearded, with shaggy brows and arms like stovepipes and hands like shovels. He’d grown up with them in the same neighborhood, fought beside them in the war, and now stood beaming at them. He was almost as excited to see the new pulley system they’d brought.
“I reckon you fellas’ll take to this place right quick,” he said. “One of the prettiest spots I ever laid eyes on. Weather’s holding nice! But this basket rig — hell, this is going to change everything.” He slapped Hank on the shoulder. “You should’ve seen me the first time I crossed this ravine. Throwing a rope and a hook like a damn fool, praying to snag a tree on the other side!”
After a few minutes of catching up, they agreed to stack supplies from Bertha and leave the cart loaded while they crossed over to scout for a claim and a place to build their cabin.
That evening, they met Tom and Rick, the miners from the other claim, and all five of them shared a dinner of venison steaks and potatoes baked in the fire. Joe had been here a full year now, and had invited Tom, Rick, Hank, Barney, and two others who hadn’t yet arrived. So far, they had found plenty of garnet, a few small gold nuggets, several pounds of gold dust, and even some silver.
But as they spoke, Hank noticed the tightness around Tom and Rick’s eyes when discussing the yield. Joe and Barney were cut from the same cloth — optimistic, always chasing the next adventure. Tom and Rick were more reserved, their smiles thinner when they spoke of what they’d pulled from the ground.
After dinner, Joe, Tom, and Rick retired to their cabins, and Hank and Barney settled in by the large group campfire. Joe had spent the evening pointing out good spots for them to set up camp, and Hank did his best to temper Barney’s enthusiasm without dampening it. They had plans to reinforce the rope bridge and set up the new pulley system for supplies.
As Hank crawled into his blankets, he felt a spark of real, contented excitement — the first he’d known since the journey began.
I I I I
Tom looked at Hank incredulously. “How in tarnation did you manage that?”
They’d just finished building a much sturdier bridge, lashing rope and wood into place, and incorporated the new pulley and basket system Hank and Barney had brought. All morning they had fought to get the tension on the lines correct, struggling to get the rig stable, all the men bickering and arguing, until Hank finally lost his temper. He told them to take a walk and leave him to it. Tom and Rick had started to argue, but Joe and Barney gave them a funny, quelling look and suggested they give him room. When they returned an hour later, Hank had figured out how to tighten the tensioner and gotten the pulley running smoothly. He only smiled at Tom’s question.
“Well, gentlemen,” Rick said, “I reckon we’ve earned ourselves a soak in a hot bath.”
Barney laughed loud and sarcastically. The three veterans of the plateau traded a glance. Joe grinned. “Oh, you lads are in for a treat.”
The five men walked about a mile inland, toward where the mountain rose steeply and the ground turned rocky. Tall grasses blanketed the flats, broken by thickets of wild rose and scattered juniper in a few varieties. They followed a faint path, climbing flat rocks that formed a rough staircase, and turned past a clump of bushes.
A steaming pool emerged from the shadows. It was fed on the far side by a spring that spilled from a cleft in the rock face, vapor rising all around in wisps and plumes. Sunlight pierced the mist, casting rainbows against the stone. The air carried a pleasant metallic or mineral smell.
“You’re joshing,” Barney said, staring. “That’s a hot spring?”
“As sure as the sky’s blue,” Joe said, grinning.
Without hesitation, Joe, Tom, and Rick peeled off their boots and clothes and plunged into the water, whooping and carrying on. Barney followed with a laugh, jumping right in. Hank, slower and smiling, waded carefully into the steaming pool. Barney let out a deep sigh as he submerged, and Hank groaned in appreciation as the warmth soaked into his bones. The water was hot, but not scalding — just right.
The five men laughed and drifted into an easy silence, letting the spring work its magic.
“It’s a wonder this doesn’t reek of rotten eggs,” Hank said. “Most hot springs I’ve been to reek of sulfur — this one doesn’t smell foul at all. Kind of brisk. Like iodine.”
“Splendid, ain’t it?” Joe grinned. “Got me through the winter out here. I built a little shed over yonder for a winter bedroom. Took it apart once the snow melted to add onto the main cabin.”
“Stayed warm enough to dip in all winter?” Barney asked.
“Yes, sir, it did — just as warm as it is now,” said Joe. “You’d be amazed how many critters it draws. This region’s thick with birds year-round. Rabbits, foxes, even mink. One morning I woke up to a herd of bighorn sheep drinking on the far side. Come winter, they all gather here for the warmth. It’s quite a sight.”
The men sat in the warm water for a while, and Hank looked up at the mountain towering above them. About a thousand feet up, he spotted what looked like the entrance to a cave. For a moment, he thought he saw a person standing there — but when he blinked, it was gone.
He asked, “What’s that opening up there, Joe? Any idea?”
Joe looked up. “I’ve noticed it too,” he said, “but I’m at a loss.”
Hank leaned back in the water, eyes still on the spot, wondering what wonders this place had yet to reveal.
The next morning, he and Barney ferried their supplies across the ravine and laid out the location for their cabin — close to the bridge and not far from fresh water. They marked the site for their outhouse, carefully placed downstream and downwind. Joe had made several trips to Missoula Mills before their arrival, hauling enough lumber for two additional cabins. With that on hand, all they needed was a foundation of loose stones, gathered from nearby.
A week later, their one-room cabin stood finished — two bed frames inside and the small stove they’d hauled in the cart for cooking and heat. The privy took another day. After that, they were ready to begin mining.
I I I I
Hank and Barney stood ankle-deep in the icy creek behind their cabin, panning for gold. The sun warmed their backs as they joked back and forth. Hank’s stomach growled, thoughts turning to lunch, when he spotted a rock that looked like it held silver ore.
“Barn, pass me my knife,” Hank called out.
Barney plucked the knife from the creek bank and tossed it in a lazy arc. Hank caught it cleanly, but the scabbard slipped free. The blade bit deep into his thumb, straight to bone.
“Damnation!” Hank cursed and squeezed his thumb in his left hand, and pulled it against his chest. Blood seeped between his fingers, dripping into the clear water. His eyes squeezed shut against the pain.
“I’m so sorry, Hank. I shouldn’t have thrown it. Let me see.” Barney splashed over, and Hank slowly released his grip to show him the cut. As he did, blood welled out of the deep slash.
They retreated to the cabin where Barney stitched the wound. The needle pierced tender flesh with each careful pass.
“Maybe ease off the panning till this heals up,” Barney said, tying off the final stitch.
“Fiddlesticks. We’ve got a lot of mining to do here, I’ll be fine,” Hank said.
For the rest of the day, Hank favored his right hand but kept panning. The specimen rock he’d wanted to test had tumbled away in the creek’s current, lost among countless others. Over the next few days, he pushed himself harder, especially when Barney inquired about the wound. On the fourth morning, his hand trembled as he tried to sip coffee, splashing it down his shirt front. He jerked his hand away, spilling more. He swore under his breath and his lips pulled back from his teeth in a rigid grimace. When Barney examined the cut, angry blisters dotted Hank’s arm and hand. The wound itself glowed an ugly red.
Within hours, Hank’s neck stiffened and ached. Barney recognized the signs from his darkest war memories. Hank’s muscles betrayed him, twitching and knotting beneath his skin like ropes drawn too tight. The spasms began as small tremors, then escalated into waves that wracked his entire body. His jaw locked shut, teeth grinding like millstones in the cabin’s oppressive quiet. Each ragged breath scraped through clenched teeth as Barney watched, helpless.
The next two days brought fresh torment. Between spasms, Hank caught his breath and met Barney’s eyes. Fear mingled with grim acceptance.
“Nothing to be done now, Barn.” The words came clipped, forced through a rigid jaw. “Seen it before. Just have to see it through.”
“Don’t say that,” Barney’s voice cracked. “We’ll find a way. I swear it.”
But the lie tasted bitter. His mind flooded with memories of field hospitals — the sound of men dying from tetanus — their bodies twisting like branches in a storm. Now those same spasms tortured his brother.
Barney rummaged through their supplies, frantic. He recalled old remedies whispered in hushed tones by desperate soldiers: a poultice of herbs, a concoction of whiskey and honey — anything that might offer relief. He tried what he could, applying warm, wet cloths to the wound, forcing remedies between Hank’s clenched teeth, bought from roadside carts on their way west. But the spasms continued, relentless and unyielding.
The other men came by over the next couple of days, sitting with Hank for a while, until things grew so bad that Barney had to send them away at Hank’s request.
Barney was working on another poultice at the stove when Hank called out, teeth chattering.
“Barney, sit with me. I don’t want to be alone.”
Barney left the stove and dropped to his knees beside the bed, clutching Hank’s hand. The skin was clammy, the grip weak.
“I’m here, Hank. I ain’t leaving.”
As the hours passed, Hank’s body betrayed him further. His neck arched back under a cruel, uncontrollable force. Muscles strained against skin. Barney watched in silent anguish as the spasms rolled through him.
Now and then, Hank’s eyes would find Barney’s, and he’d offer a tight smile — a flicker of his old self breaking through the pain.
“Remember those nights in Chicago?” Hank whispered hoarsely. “We’d sneak up to the rooftop of that old tenement? Thought we were on top of the world, looking out over the city.”
Barney chuckled softly, eyes misting. “Yeah. We fancied ourselves kings. Silly fools we were.”
“Still fools,” Hank said, his breath catching as another spasm hit. “But we had good times, didn’t we?”
Night settled in, the cabin lit by the soft glow of lantern light. The room smelled of sawdust and sweat. Barney kept vigil, heart heavy with what he knew was coming.
The spasms worsened. Hank’s body arched off the bed, muscles tightening to the point of tearing. Barney held him through each wave, murmuring words of comfort — though they rang hollow, even to his own ears.
Hank opened his eyes after a particularly bad spasm. Terror filled, his gaze darted around the room, and in a small, childlike voice he whispered, “I don’t like this. I don’t like this.”
Then his body seized in the most violent spasm yet. His back arched, stiff as a board, only his heels and head touching the mattress. There was a loud crack — the sound of bone shattering — and suddenly Hank went limp, collapsing back onto the bed. Barney gripped his brother’s hand, feeling life slip away beneath his fingers.
His heart stuttered. He cradled Hank’s hand to his cheek as he lost all composure, sobs racking his chest, his own body echoing Hank’s final spasms. Tears came freely now. He held Hank’s hand to his forehead, to his lips, to his face, over and over — unable to let go.
Time paused. The world fell away into a tunnel of blackness. All that remained visible was Hank’s hand, framed in the small aperture of Barney’s grief.
When he finally rose, Barney was spent — exhausted and numb. He covered Hank’s body with a blanket. The sobs had dwindled to stuttering, involuntary breaths, like a toddler recovering from a tantrum.
He staggered to the door, stepped outside, and sagged down on the rough bench Hank had made for them, and the world began to come back. The morning sun bathed the valley in golden light. The wind whispered through the trees.
Jack Seeley shouldered his way from his Uber toward the entrance to LAX’s Terminal 4, dodging rolling bags and distracted travelers staring at phones. The air carried hints of burnt coffee and jet exhaust. A flash of white caught his attention — a man in an immaculate linen suit leaning against a pillar, watching him across the crowd with unsettling focus. He was short and lean, with wild, auburn hair escaping from beneath a white Panama hat trimmed with a black band. His handlebar mustache dominated his face, giving him the air of a riverboat gambler. A long, brown cigarette dangled from his fingers, releasing sweet-smelling smoke that seemed to hover around him rather than dissipate on the breeze. He watched Jack through squinted eyes as he smoked.
As Jack approached the man, a woman in front of him suddenly tripped and fell, sprawling headlong onto the pavement, dropping her rolling bag and the handbag strapped to the handle. Both Jack and the man rushed over to help her, Jack on the right, the man in the white suit on her left. They helped her to her feet and despite a bloody palm, she seemed okay. The two men handed her the bags, and she was on her way. Jack noticed that not only was the man wearing a pristine, white linen suit with shiny, black shoes, he was wearing a white linen vest under his suit jacket. In addition, he had a gold pocket watch chain linked to a watch pocket in his vest. In the maneuver to rescue the young lady, the man hadn’t once let go of his brown, sweet-smelling cigarette.
The man tipped his hat with theatrical precision, then walked away without any luggage or apparent purpose. Jack filed the odd encounter away and headed for security.
After Jack made quick transit through the PreCheck line and made it to his gate, he noticed that the man was also waiting to board. As these coincidences sometimes work out, he turned out to be sitting right next to Jack in first class. After they both were seated, the man turned to Jack and said, “Hello there, my fellow traveler and rescuer of damsels in distress. My name is Sinclair Lipson,” and he paused before adding, “the third.” He had a strange, old-fashioned pacing to his speech and an accent that fell somewhere between Yosemite Sam and a third-tier nightly newscaster. He extended his hand, and Jack shook it dutifully.
“Nice to meet you, Mr. Lipson, I’m Jack Seeley. What brings you to Spokane?”
“Ah, Jack, a pleasure. I’m returning to the area after a long absence. I haven’t been back there in what feels like… well, forever.”
Lipson smiled at Jack in a sort of friendly way, but his eyes were narrowed. His smile was all in the mouth, his eyes looked cold. It gave Jack a chill. He had been about to tell this man that his father was also a ‘Trip’, or third son with the same name, but he thought it better to disengage.
Jack did the universal trick of the frequent flier; he smiled and he reached into his bag for headphones and a book. He pulled out a copy of Hugh Howey’s newest novel, slipping on the Nura noise-canceling headphones that he preferred. Lipson asked the flight attendant for a Jack Daniels on ice, and the flight went smoothly. Lipson consumed several drinks during the flight to Spokane.
I I I I
Jack gratefully grabbed his latte in the Spokane airport before continuing his walk to the car rental to drive through to Kellogg. It was early March, and he had gotten a call from his grandmother’s caregiver, Amy, that he should make the time to come out. His grandmother was unable to walk, even with the walker she’d used for the last fifteen years. She was now effectively bedridden.
Jack asked the cheerful woman at the Enterprise office for something with all-wheel drive and clearance. An hour later, he pulled off the highway and found his way by memory to his grandmother’s house at 621 Chestnut Street. Jack pulled into the driveway of the tiny bungalow. His great-grandfather had built it in 1910, and a cornerstone on the left side that marked it as one of the oldest houses in town. Jack was relieved to see that the yard was in good shape. He’d been paying for a yard service on his grandmother’s behalf since she was unable to take care of the property. The modest homes around it told the story of the neighborhood — some showing pride of ownership with fresh paint and tidy yards, others defined by rusty cars and peeling siding.
Jack’s great-grandfather had died in an accident in the mountains, and his grandfather had been gifted the house upon his return from serving in the U.S. Army during World War II. Jack’s father had been raised in the house until he left for Seattle in the 70s to work as an engineer at Boeing.
His grandmother, Audrey, had been younger than his grandfather, John Jr.; they’d met at a dance for soldiers returning from the war. John had been sent to Fort Lewis upon his return, outside of Tacoma. His grandmother had grown up in Tacoma, and the USO frequently held dances for soldiers on the base. Jack’s grandparents often talked about love at first sight and how they had hit it off immediately. They’d gotten married all in a rush when she was only seventeen. Jack’s father was born in 1946. Jack remembered how his grandfather would scoop him up when he was small. His grandfather always smelled of aftershave. He was always clean shaven, but in the evenings, his face would have a rough stubble of beard.
His grandfather had been in the infantry and survived D-Day. He told many stories of his adventures in Europe during the war. It wasn’t until Jack was much older that he realized all of his grandfather’s stories were gentle stories about people. They were anecdotes about personal relationships, funny stories about mishaps, and fun stories like getting lost and finding a bakery where he traded chocolate from his rations for freshly baked bread. Jack’s favorite story was how his grandfather had been holed up with his unit for a week in the countryside of France. A little boy came every day and spoke to them in French — but none of his platoon understood. The little boy kept saying, “Oof” and “Loof” to them every day, while his comrades and he survived on rations. Finally, the boy showed up with a basket of fresh eggs and made it clear that l’oeuf was the word for egg in French. All that time, the kid had been looking to trade rations for eggs.
None of John Seeley’s stories were about the war, the war was just a circumstance, a background against which his stories were set. When his grandfather got sick in his late 70s, Jack would sit with him. It was then that he heard completely new versions of the stories he had grown up with. The darkness underpinning the once light and whimsical stories was transformative for him. After his grandfather died, Jack would still come back to spend time with his grandmother, whom he loved deeply. Still, for all his affection for his grandmother, Jack had been remarkably close with his grandfather.
Jack knocked gently at the front door before entering — his grandmother was laying in a hospital bed in the living room, bright-eyed and smiling as he came into the foyer. The house smelled the same as always, the unique smell of generations of Seeleys and the faint scent of furniture polish. The house was immaculate. His grandmother’s nurse, Amy, poked her head in from the kitchen to say hello. Jack walked over to give his grandmother a kiss.
“Hi, Gran, how are you doing today?” said Jack.
“I’m fine. Now step back, and let me look at you,” said Audrey Seeley. “Oh, it’s so nice to see you, Jackie.”
Her hair was pure white and pulled back from her face. Her blue eyes sparkled, and her cherubic face was deeply lined with a fine spider web of broken blood vessels around each eye. She was covered with a comforter and sheet and was wearing a flannel nightgown under that. She was tiny and frail, but her mind was sharp and her sense of humor intact.
The room was filled with various gadgets and medical equipment, all with casters and wheels to allow them to be easily moved and repositioned. The room had been largely emptied of most of its furniture, but there was a relatively new flatscreen mounted on the wall across from her bed, a couple of comfortable, old leather armchairs and her hospital bed.
The living room gave way to a small dining room with a table and chairs for six and then the kitchen. Behind the kitchen was an addition put on in the 90s by his father. It consisted of a handicap-accessible bathroom and bedroom for his grandmother that was now used by Amy since his grandmother needed full-time care.
Jack reached over and gently but firmly planted a kiss on her cheek, giving her a big enveloping hug. She was all bones and dry skin, but she smelled of lavender soap.
“I’m so glad you made it here, Jackie. And for a whole week!” Audrey said quietly, but with excitement. “Why don’t you get yourself settled in the guest bedroom upstairs? We can catch up in a little bit.”
Jack smiled and politely ignored her instructions by sitting down in the comfortable leather armchair next to her bed. He made small talk for ten minutes or so, then went out to the car for his bags. He carried them back into the house and up the stairs off the front entrance into the bright but cramped second floor.
There were three bedrooms on the second floor and one bathroom; his grandparents’ bedroom, his father’s old bedroom, and the “guest bedroom” that was mainly his own room from his childhood. He had spent school vacations with his grandparents for most of his childhood, including most of his summer breaks. The room had an antique furniture set of dark wood. He loved that it was wallpapered with a print from 1976 that celebrated the bicentennial. It featured a white background with a colonial theme with various vignettes of colonial scenes in clusters, patriot soldiers in three corner hats, cannons on either side of the liberty bell, colonial era ships, Paul Revere astride his horse, and various colonial slogans such as, “Spirit of ‘76,” “Don’t tread on me!” and “I have not yet begun to fight!”
Jack vividly remembered his childhood in this room. Summertime in Idaho was gorgeous, dry air, blue skies. The climate was ideal, dry and warm. Additionally, he had a personal freedom here as a child that he never could have possessed in Seattle. His grandfather loved to take him for hikes in the woods, and he taught him to fly fish for Cutthroat and Brook Trout. All the little things he’d have learned in the Boy Scouts, had he stayed in Seattle for the summer.
Jack packed away his things, took a quick shower, and went downstairs to have dinner with his grandmother.
“Jackie, I’ve been meaning to tell you that your great-grandfather’s foot locker is upstairs in my old bedroom. It has lots of old papers and pictures and a journal in it that I think you’d enjoy looking through. There’s a lot in there about Crystal Village,” said his grandmother.
Crystal Village was the mining town his great-grandfather had been born in, somewhere up in the mountains. Funny, Jack hadn’t thought about the village in years. He knew that it was one of the mining towns that had been destroyed in the Great Fire of 1910. Anyone who spent time in this area knew about the Great Fire, which had destroyed half of Kellogg, half of Wallace, and completely wiped out more than a dozen towns. Millions of acres of forest land had burned, and there were lots of stories and legends about the Great Fire. During his early childhood, he’d heard stories of Crystal Village from his grandfather, who had never lived there. They’d been passed down from his father, so they were more like fairy tales to Jack.
They finished dinner and dessert, and afterwards, they watched a little television together. His grandmother fell asleep around 7:30, and shortly after, Jack whispered goodnight to Amy and went upstairs.
Jack entered his grandparents’ bedroom and reached into the closet to pull out the trunk that was there. He remembered his grandfather showing him a few things in this locker when he was little, but he had completely forgotten about it until his grandmother brought it up. The footlocker was more of a chest. It was covered in black leather that was dried and cracked, and it had bronze straps holding it together. It was heavy, perhaps as much as 80 pounds.
He pulled it open and carefully laid the top back until it touched the floor behind itself. Inside there were some built-in drawers and boxes that were all upholstered in the same, faded material as the rest of the trunk’s interior. Originally, it had been decorated with yellow and white stripes. The yellow portion was about an inch wide. Then there was a thread or two of black, a sixteenth of an inch of white, then another thread or two of black, and finally, there was a wide yellow stripe again. The contents smelled old and dusty.
Inside the trunk there were some of his grandfather’s things, mementos from World War II and his time in Europe. There was also a photo album from after the war. He’d seen that before. In it there were pictures of Paris, London, the ship that carried him back to the US, and then pictures of New York and his war buddies. He set that aside and found another box that was upholstered in the same yellow and white stripes as the trunk itself. It was about two feet long, a foot wide, and 18-inches deep.
The box yielded faces from another century — first a man with dark hair falling straight as rain with striking light eyes that seemed to pierce through time. His sharp nose and well-groomed mustache spoke of authority. At the bottom, in precise script: Eoinn Seeley. Jack gasped. His great-great-grandfather stared back at him across generations. There was a picture of a beautiful woman with curly, dark hair and arched eyebrows. The pictures were the same size and had the same background. They were three quarter view portraits, with both subjects looking off to the left, behind the camera. Her name, Rose Grady Seeley, was written at the bottom in the same, crisp handwriting. This was Jack’s great-great-grandmother.
Stacked underneath the old photos, there were several hand-written letters, each preserved in their original envelopes. The paper was fragile and yellowing, and the seams of the folds were cracking and almost falling apart. So as Jack went through these things, he was careful to take photographs of all of them with his phone.
Inside the box was a smaller box that was heavy and made of plain, heavy, old-fashioned card stock, not corrugated cardboard like you’d find today. This was one of the items he remembered from his childhood, his grandfather had shown him this box once.
He pulled it out. It was tied with a red string, which he untied carefully. The inside was lined with black felt, and there were eight stones set into the felt in custom shapes, cut specifically to hold the rock specimens. There was a gold nugget the size of his thumb and three garnets. One of these three garnets was the size of a golf ball, polished to show the rare but beautiful star pattern that sometimes could be found here in Idaho. The other two garnets were cut, seemingly of high quality, and these were each the size of his thumbnail. There was also a piece of silver that was tarnished but also the size of his thumb. Finally, there were three very pretty, large, uncut crystals. He couldn’t identify their type but, one was white, one pink, and one a light blue. Drawing in a deep breath, he photographed the contents of the box and carefully closed it up and put it aside.
Among the remaining items in the trunk, there was a framed photograph, with glass over the front of it. It was about 10 by 14 inches, and it showed eight people, seven of them were men and one was a woman. They stood on a cobblestone street in front of a large, brick, Gothic-style building. The caption at the bottom photo read, “The Original Eight.” He could see the tall Eoinn Seeley in the center. Yet, there was an even taller man with lighter hair and wild sideburns next to him. That gentleman was muscular and had a great smirk that he was trying to hide by looking serious. He seemed to be in his late 40s, a bit older than Jack was now. To that man’s left was a woman in her 20s. She was thin and tall with a very businesslike appearance. She had a pretty face with straight, dark hair pulled back, and she was wearing men’s work clothes. To her left was a man about her height, handsome with medium hair and clean shaven. He looked to be in his early 30s. Next to him was a man with light hair and spectacles, he was about 40, taller than his friend, and wearing a light-colored shirt with wool pants. On the other side of Seeley was an older man with a shock of white hair and a scraggly white beard. He seemed to be in his 50s or 60s, and he had a sour look on his face. To his right were two men that looked almost identical, with curly, dark hair and long, dark beards, both in their 40s. On the back was a neat, hand-written legend that said, “From Left to right, Angus and Egan Sullivan, Finn McEnhill, Eoinn Seeley, Liam O’Connor, Sam King, Sean O’Neil, Colin O’Shea.” He put the picture to the side.
There was a leather folio that held thick paper and was stuffed with clippings. When he opened it, he got very excited. The first page was a journal-style entry written by his great-grandfather, John Seeley.
September 15, 1910
The Great Fire has scattered us to the winds. Crystal Village, that beautiful dream Father spent his life building, lies in ashes. The bridge is gone. Everything we couldn’t carry is gone.
Sam O’Connor and Angus Sullivan have been remarkably generous, considering their own losses. They’ve provided enough capital for Henry O’Connor and me to establish a proper bank here in Kellogg. The region desperately needs stability now, with so many displaced and destitute. Access to credit is paramount.
I cannot fathom Father’s choice to remain behind. The stubborn, old man always said Crystal Village was his life’s work but to die for it? The other Original Eight who survived speak of their last moments in whispers, but none will tell me directly what happened that night.
Mary has convinced me to build our home here in Kellogg. While half the town burned, the location is ideal, close enough to Wallace for business but removed from its rougher elements. The land I’ve chosen sits above the river, with a view of the mountains. Perhaps distance from Crystal Village will help ease these dark thoughts.
I must remember to write Sam and thank her properly for the financial arrangements. She’s handled everything with remarkable composure, though I know she grieves deeply. Strange to think that skinny girl Father and his men found in the wilderness would become such a force in all our lives.
The surveyor comes tomorrow to mark the property lines. Mary insists on a good foundation, she says if we’re to put down roots, we should do it properly. She’s right, of course. Time to look forward, not back.
Jack assumed the Sam O’Connor mentioned in the journal entry was the Sam King from the picture. She seemed to have married Liam O’Connor or maybe another O’Connor. He wondered if she was related to his old friend, Susanne O’Connor who had lived a few blocks away from his grandparents.
The pages following this entry contained dozens of yellowing and deteriorating newspaper clippings carefully glued down on the pages. They were all about the Great Fire of 1910. Some called it the Big Blowup. There were articles about people who died in the fire and articles about survivors. Some were heroic tales, others tragedies. There was one, small article about Crystal Village.
REMOTE IDAHO MINING SETTLEMENT LOST IN BIG BLOW UP
The Seattle Post-Intelligencer, August 25, 1910
KELLOGG, IDAHO — Among the countless communities devastated by the recent forest fires that swept across the Idaho panhandle, reports have emerged of a secluded mining settlement known as Crystal Village that was completely destroyed, leaving nothing but ash and rubble. The settlement, which was founded in 1867, was reportedly one of the most prosperous private operations in the region.
Survivors arriving in Kellogg confirm that Eoinn Seeley, the settlement’s founder, perished along with one other resident while attempting to save vital records from the mining office. The village’s bridge across a deep mountain ravine collapsed during the evacuation, cutting off any possibility of return.
The settlement’s exact location remains closely held. Survivors have dispersed to various communities throughout the region, ending an unusual experiment in controlled mining development.
Local authorities expect the final death toll from the fires to rise as reports continue to arrive from remote areas.
There were no other journal entries, just the many articles. Jack imagined that John Seeley had intended to write more, but his focus slipped away.
Tucked into the last page of this folio was a hand-drawn map that showed Kellogg and Wallace and showed a trail to follow up to Crystal Village’s location. It was hard to be sure how to follow it, as the references were fairly generic and quite out of date. However, then he noticed Eagle City and Murray listed, both of which were ghost towns in the mountains. He got a sense of where this might be. Jack wondered if he could find the ruins of the old mining town.
Years ago, Jack had asked his grandparents why nobody went back up to find the village. At the time, his grandfather simply brushed off the question, saying nothing was left but ghosts.
The skinny boy stood on a fence rail outside a small cabin. His cheeks and eyes were hollow, and the sharp bones of his face were clearly visible. He was nine years old. The boy wore a worn felt hat that was too big, a rough sweater of wool, pants that were too short, and scuffed boots. His dirt-stained face bore the remnants of old tears, leaving pale trails down his cheeks. He stood on the bottom rail of the fence and leaned against the top, idly swinging his left leg. He stared balefully, watching the dust cloud fall to the ground amidst the sound of horses snorting and shifting about as they began to settle.
The six men on horseback had pulled up thirty feet back from the boy, watching him. The small windowless cabin behind him had a wisp of smoke rising from a hole in the roof. The split-log fence the boy stood on was part of a pen for pigs, but there were no pigs to be seen, just their lingering odor. The garden near the house had nothing growing in it. A blanket covered the doorway into the cabin instead of a door.
“Hey, lad, what do they call this place?” asked one of the men from the back of his horse in an Irish accent. The boy just stared, not answering. After a moment, another of the men growled hoarsely, “Where’s yer family at? Anyone else around we can talk to?” The boy glared, chewing the insides of his cheeks, swinging his leg in the air. He didn’t answer.
Another of the men stepped down off his horse, reached into a saddle bag, and pulled out a cloth that covered something. He walked toward the boy, unwrapping the cloth, and showed him a hard roll of bread, and some cheese. “Would ye fancy a bit of food?” he asked quietly. His voice was kind.
The boy’s eyes were fixated on the roll and cheese. Ever so slowly, he licked at his dry, cracked lips and stepped down off the fence, sliding his legs down on the front side toward the men. He ducked his hat-covered head under the top rail. He took a few steps toward the man, then began to teetered to the left and by his third step, he started to collapse slowly to the ground. The man with the roll strode forward and scooped him up, carrying him toward the house. Behind him the other men dismounted and tied their horses off at the fence.
The man with the boy in his arms was the shortest and youngest of the men in his party. He walked quickly toward the cabin, pulled aside the stained gray wool blanket hanging across the doorway, and pushed through with the boy cradled in his arms. As he did, he called out, “Hallo, the house, are ye home? Yer boy is sick!” He peered around the inside of the cabin, allowing his eyes to adjust.
There was a small fire in one corner of the room. The smoke rising to the ceiling, exiting through a hole in the roof. There was a kettle on a stand over the barely smoldering coals. In the corner opposite the hearth a bed frame stood covered with a jumble of blankets. A woman lay on the bed, her dark hair ragged, pulled back from her face. She was clearly dead, her skin ashen and tight and her eyes open and fixed in a stare. She must’ve died recently as the place had as of yet no smell of death.
In another corner was a small, rough table ringed about with a few stools. An empty bucket sat on the table. In the other corner a vacant cradle stood abandoned. The whole cabin was no more than ten feet across in both directions. The floor of the cabin was hard dirt, having been raked and swept as clean as a dirt floor can be.
The man looked down at the boy in his arms and saw that his eyes were open, watching him, but still hadn’t said a word. He ducked back outside and found a clean spot of grass to lay the boy down. He loosened the boy’s sweater and looked down the neck at the boy’s bony chest. The boy smelled stale, of old sweat and dirt. His hat fell back from his head. The boy’s unkempt, greasy hair stuck out in all directions.
“The name’s Sean,” said the man softly. “Can ye speak? Are ye thirsty?”
The boy nodded his head slightly, and Sean called out to the other men to bring him a canteen.
A clean shaven, blond man arrived with the water, and checked the boy over with cool, gentle hands. “Hello, Colin’s my name,” said the man. “Yer in a bad way from lack of water, but we’ll have ye sorted out directly.”
The other men took turns peeking into the cabin, a few of them spread out into the surrounding area, looking for any sign of other survivors. Sean poured a trickle of water into the boy’s mouth, who weakly swallowed it. The other men gathered around watching. Eoinn, the tallest of them with a stern but kind face, walked back from having inspected the area behind the cabin.
“Two fresh graves lie just beyond the cabin, one for an adult and another for a babe. There’s also a pig slaughter shed, untouched of late. And the privy reeks of foul fish,” he said.
At that, several of the men exchanged worried glances, one shuddered. All of them were well aware that the rotten fish smell was a marker for typhoid fever. Without anyone giving orders or making requests, two of them grabbed shovels from their saddles and walked off behind the cabin to dig a third grave. For his part, Sean got the boy to take some more water and a few bites of bread.
“We’ll need to clean him up and make camp a distance from this sorrowful place,” Eoinn said. “Two of ye wrap the lady and bear her ‘round back of the cabin. Then, let’s all of us get cleaned off. We crossed a stream not a mile back — that’s where we’ll set camp and wash the grime away.”
The men did as he bid them, efficiently and without complaint. They rode about a mile upstream from the cabin, then made camp. Two of the men started a blazing fire, then threw a black kettle over it filled with water.
After the water warmed up, Sean and Colin stripped the boy’s clothes off to clean him up. To their surprise, the child wasn’t a boy at all — he was a girl. They carefully shielded the girl from the others. They ladled warm water over her head and went at it with a bar of soap. They gently untangled her rats’ nest of hair until, after a few minutes, Colin finally just cut the last bit loose with his knife. That accomplished, they rinsed and dried her off, and wrapped her in a blanket. With the bath completed, Sean took her clothes along with a hunk of soap down to the river. He scrubbed them over a washboard to scour them until they were as clean as he could get them.
Hours later, Sean sat next to the girl near the evening fire. He had spent the remainder of the afternoon encouraging her to take water and eat a bit of bread softened in tea. While he tended to the child, the other men washed off the grime of the trail with warm water and soap. By sunset, the camp was set up. Food was passed around on plates. The girl, having had water and bread all afternoon, seemed ready for something more substantial. They all sat quietly around the fire eating.
Sean began, softly, “What might they call ye, then?”
“Sam.” she replied, her voice small but clear.
“Sam, what’s your surname, if you don’t mind sharing?”
“King,” Sam answered, a bit more confidence seeping into her voice. “I’m Samantha King, but Sam suits me. My ma is Amanda, Papa is Henry, and my sister is Glory.”
Sean noted the present tense of her family names. “How many years have ye seen, Sam?”
“Nine.”
Eoinn had been quietly listening from the other side of the campfire and gently said, “Miss Sam, it’s an honor to make your acquaintance under such trying circumstances. My deepest condolences for your loss. Be assured, your mother was shown all the respects due. Your strength in the face of adversity speaks volumes. Ye’ve done your family proud.”
Sam didn’t respond but snuggled down in the blanket a bit more.
Sam looked around the fire, watching these men. They all looked tough but not scary. They seemed nice. She listened to them talk. They all had a funny way of talking, sort of like Mrs. O’Leary who had lived behind them in Quincy, Massachusetts. She felt safe and warm. She had a full belly for the first time in days. Eoinn pulled a small bottle of black liquid out of his pack. He gave a sip of it to Sam, it tasted of licorice and fire. Soon her eyes drooped shut and the world disappeared.
Sam woke the next day feeling much better. The men looked the other way while she dressed in her now clean, dry clothes. Once she was ready Eoinn placed her behind Sean on his horse, and together, they resumed their journey on the trail.
After adjusting to the horse’s gait, Sean asked, “Sam, have ye kin, be it here in the West or back East? Is there someone we ought to be seeking out on yer behalf?”
“No, my Papa and his kin were at odds. They didn’t talk anymore. So we never met. My Ma, she’s without kin as well. There’s none left for me,” her voice dwindled to a whisper.
“My heart aches for ye, Sam. Losing loved ones cuts deep, but not all is lost. We’re here in the West in search of land for mining. Fortune willing, the men will send back for their families. You’re welcome to join our venture. There’ll be work, but you’ll be part of our band. Take your time to decide, no rush. Or if ye’d rather, we’ll find a safe place for ye to stay. Either way, you’re not alone, and you’re welcome ta throw in with us.”
Sam rode in silence for a while. Then after a while she asked, “Do you have a wife and children waiting to be fetched?”
Sean laughed. “Nay, lass, no family save for these men here. Colin’s akin to a brother to me. Fond as I am of young ones, it’s the children of my comrades that are like mine own. That it shan’t always be just us men, is what’s important. In time, we aim to build a homestead, bringing over families and creating a community where ye’ll find other young ones to befriend.”
Sam grew quiet after that. Still, by the end of the long day of riding, she felt at home with them. They had shared their food and water with her, and she had helped them water their horses. She liked the funny way they talked too. They joked and cajoled each other. She could see herself fitting in with them. These were kind men, like her papa. They were full of quiet jokes, winks, nods. They seemed calm and at ease. Sean was the one who’d been kindest to her, and he also was a jokester with the other men, frequently making them laugh.
The next day they made camp just outside of Virginia City, Montana — the largest town she’d seen since her family had left Chicago. The men asked Sam to watch over the horses while they went into town. Clearly, they trusted her with their belongings. So while they were away, she kept the fire going, ate some venison jerky, and looked at the stars. It was then and there that she decided to stay with Sean and the other men.
I I I I
Liam sat at the bar, the hard wooden stool beneath him, his hands spread out on the bar, fingers wide. He smelled whiskey. Tobacco and wood smoke left a cloudy haze in the air. Across the bar there was a wall with a few shelves sparsely lined with bottles. His face was reflected back at him in a small mirror. He could see his unruly auburn hair sticking out like straw beneath his worn, weathered, navy blue hat. His sideburns were wild, and the rest of his face was covered with five days of stubble growth. His green eyes were bloodshot, a mostly empty, chipped and scratched whiskey glass sat in front of him. His dirty gray linen shirt was rolled up at the cuffs to his mid-forearm. He could see his wool, navy blue pants as he looked down his front. On his right stood an empty barstool, on his left a man leaned against the bar, barely four feet away, staring at him.
“I said I don’t like Irish, goddamn potato eaters,” slurred the drunk man, his weight staggering back and forth between each leg, wobbling. He had a dark look to him; dark skin, dark hair and beard, and blackish-brown eyes. He wore a brown hat and duster and denim pants. The man’s right arm was stretched outwards toward him, his fingers opening and closing but generally pointing in his direction, palm downwards. His hand wavered, moving in a slow, unsteady circle in the man’s drunken stupor.
Behind the man, Liam could see a medium-sized saloon, with six round tables and a dozen men sprinkled across them in small groups. Some were playing cards. Some were smoking, and all of them were drinking. The room was dimly lit, what light there was being provided mainly by the grimy windows and a precious few, ancient oil lamps. Liam ignored the drunk for a bit, swallowed the rest of his drink in one gulp, and then slowly turned his head and stood up. He towered over the drunk by a good six inches. Liam measured six foot three and was well-knit with broad shoulders and back, his muscles bunched and cabled under his shirt.
“I reckon the feeling might well be mutual, wherever it is ye hail from,” said Liam, his Irish accent on full display, “but I can’t recall giving ye cause for ire this day, friend. What say ye to a dram of whiskey on my tab, and then we can part as better acquaintances?”
The drunk stiffened and looked up at Liam’s hat, then down at Liam’s feet. He looked back over his shoulder to see if any of his friends had stood up behind him, but none had.
He considered the much larger man in front of him, saying shakily, “Well now, tha’s… tha’s a firs’ for me,” he slurred, swaying slightly. “An Irish-man offerin’ to buy me a drink.” He squinted up at Liam, his expression softening. “Maybe I was… was wrong ’bout you people.”
“Liam O’Connor’s the name,” said Liam, offering his hand to the dark man.
“Stan Brewster,” said the man, accepting the proffered hand.
Liam circled the man’s shoulder in a friendly embrace and steered him to the stool next to him at the bar. Then he signaled to the bartender for two whiskeys, saying conspiratorially, “What has brought ye out here to the edge of the civilized world, Mr. Brewster?”
Brewster sat tottering back and forth on his bar stool. He drew in a deep breath as if trying to collect himself. Then he lowered his voice to a whisper and said, “Gold, Mis’er O’Con… O’Conner,” Brewster mumbled, struggling as he leaned in too close, his breath heavy with whiskey. “Gold, silver, jewels—whatever treas’res these hills might… might yield.” He punctuated his statement with a hiccup.
“O’Connor, if ye please, Mr. Brewster. O’Connor. And have ye found any of these riches here in Alder Gulch? I had thought Virginia City was played out by now.”
“Nah, we ain’t… ain’t found none,” Brewster said, his words running together as he tried to focus his bleary eyes on Liam. “Too late… we was too late. They’ve brought in them big hy-hydraulic mining rigs now.” He made a wobbly gesture with his hand. “Gets at the deeper veins, see? An’ that’s when us… us indepen’ent placer miners gotta move on.” He tapped the bar for emphasis, nearly missing it entirely. “Me an’ the boys, we’re thinkin’ of… of headin’ off to Cal’fornia. Better luck there, maybe.”
They sat together at the bar for a few minutes, then Liam graduated to a table with Brewster and a few of his friends. Brewster nodded off to sleep almost as soon as they sat down, but his friends were more animated. As the afternoon wore on, the conversation ranged from a grim assessment of the prospects for a successful strike here, to questions back and forth about Idaho City and southern Idaho territory, to hopefulness for a fresh start in the hills of California.
One man related some of the rumors of small claims in the Bitterroots in Idaho territory. He gave particular creedence to stories about the success some were having in the mountains past Hell Gate, now called Missoula Mills. Liam bought several rounds of drinks for the men, and over the course of the evening, their ranks swelled. He asked probing questions about remote mining stakes that had yet to prove out. He didn’t say it, but he was looking for places that hadn’t struck yet, but that were nonetheless promising. Before the crowd knew it, all their secrets fell out of them.
As the evening wound down, a group of six men entered the saloon. They were dusty from the road, and they took over a large table. The barman brought them a bottle and glasses, and Liam got up to go sit with them. They all had Irish accents.
I I I I
Sam sat on her horse, Victory, following behind Sean. The saddle felt like home to her now, and she remembered ruefully the sores on her inner thighs from the first few days of travel. Eoinn had bought this beautiful Palouse mare for her from a Nez Perce horse dealer. The mare was a young, but gentle horse, and Sam and Victory quickly learned to love each other. Victory had a handsome gray coat with dark spots, almost like a leopard. Sam was always finding her treats and sneaking them to her. The men pretended they didn’t notice. Victory was stable, steady, and never spooked. She was agile too and could jump over a five foot high bush. Fearless to the point of recklessness, the mare could swim any body of water. Sam had never loved an animal like she loved Victory.
As they traversed the trail, the mounted riders were strung out in a line, with Angus and Egan in the lead, Finn next, Eoinn behind him, then Sean, Sam, and Colin. Liam brought up the rear. At the moment, they were passing through a mountain pass in Montana, traveling West from the Butte City camp. As always, Victory was steady, but she started to look around instead of ahead, sniffing at the air. Sean was also suddenly very alert. Somehow without her knowing it was happening, Egan, Finn, Colin, and Liam had disappeared. She sat up straight in her saddle and looked around, trying to see where they’d all gotten off to.
What remained of the party came down a short decline into a clearing where the trail turned off to the right and back uphill. Without any warning, a group of men stepped out into the clearing from behind trees all dressed in hats, long dusters and bandanas pulled up over their mouths and noses. Sean pulled up on his reins, stopped his horse, and told Sam to stay calm. Sam pulled up on her reins, and Victory stopped next to Sean’s horse.
The men had their pistols raised, and one of them called out in a gruff voice, “We’ll be needin’ your valuables, and no funny business, you hear?! Keep them hands where we can see ’em.” There were four men, each holding a gun. The one closest to Sean and Sam was nervous and twitchy.
Sean said, “Easy there, friend. No need for any rash actions.”
Eoinn said from the middle of the group, “We’re all calm.. It’s all going to be fine.”
The first man who had spoken shouted, “Shut it! Enough chatter! Hand over your loot.” He stepped forward a few steps and put his hand out toward Eoinn.
Sam was watching the barrel of the gun the man was pointing at Eoinn, and kept glancing back at the man who had his gun trained on Sean. She, it seemed, was not enough of a threat to concern the men. She considered that for a moment and wondered if there was anything she could do.
There was a sudden sound, and in a flash, all four robbers had a man standing close behind them with a knife pressed to their throats. Finn, Egan, Colin, and Liam had returned without warning, and now the highwaymen were lowering their pistols and handing them over. Eoinn slid out of his saddle and walked to the man who’d been pointing his gun at him. He took the man’s gun from Egan. He leaned in toward the man, who was petrified, shaking and covered in sweat. He whispered something. The man shook his head in response and said, “N-no, sir. Just us.”
Eoinn sniffed and examined the man’s pistol. Then he pulled down the bandit’s bandana disdainfully and looked him over. The bandit was about 30 years old. Eoinn leaned back in and said something else to him. Sam couldn’t hear what was said, but the tone of Eoinn’s voice was unlike anything she’d heard before from him. The bandit suddenly lost control of his bladder and his pants darkened, dark, yellow urine pooling under his boots.
Eoinn grimaced in disgust and then looked at Finn, who pushed his man to the ground. Beside Sam, Sean slid from his horse to take control of the cowed man. Finn walked back into the woods, and they could hear his voice talking gently, soothingly. They heard the winnie of horses, and a few minutes later, Finn led out a line of four horses, pulled off their bridles, and let them go. He went to the first horse, whispered in its ear, and it ran off down the trail in the direction they’d come. The other horses followed, leaving behind them only the sound of their hooves as they galloped off into the forest. Finn went back into the woods for a few minutes and came back carrying weapons, some knives, an axe, and several bags. The robbers looked scared. Finn put the weapons in his saddle bags, and nodded at Eoinn.
“Gentlemen, I am Captain Eoinn Seeley, formerly of the Irish Brigade, Union Army. Ye’ve gravely erred today, and your futures now hang in the balance. We’ve freed your horses and taken your weapons. Ye’ll be left with just enough to survive your journey back. But mark my words: if our paths cross again, ye will not be so fortunate. We’ve no quarrel with former Confederates, but we will not tolerate thievery or threats. Change your ways, or face the consequences! Understood?”
All four men nodded and said they did. Eoinn left the most frightened and nervous of the four untied, Finn tied the rest to trees. He told the fourth man that he could untie his friends once Eoinn and his men had cleared the next turn of the path. He agreed, then Eoinn’s men remounted, and they all headed onward down the trail.
When they’d been traveling for a while, Sam asked Sean, “How did Eoinn know that they were Rebel soldiers?”
Sean said, “Their pistols were knock offs of the Colt Navy revolver, with brass handles. Those were made in the South during the war. Also, they had little bits of Confederate kit, pieces of uniforms, just little things… but ye can tell.”
“What did Eoinn say to that man that made him so scared?” asked Sam in a whisper.
Sean chuckled softly, “Let’s just say Eoinn knows how to make a man reconsider his life choices. He’s got a way with words that can chill you to the bone.”
I I I I
It had been almost four months since the men had saved her, and Sam had gotten to know them pretty well.
Sean was still her favorite. He was handsome and in his twenties. Sean was the shortest of the men, with a mop of reddish-brown hair and big, green eyes. He was clean shaven, but frequently had a stubble of bright red beard. Sean always carried himself with a bit of whimsy, always making jokes that made the other men snicker and laugh. He was a good musician and singer, and he knew many plays and poems and songs by heart. At any given moment he might be singing an old folk song, or he might be telling a hilarious joke, or he might be reciting Shakespeare.
Colin was a blond doctor who wore spectacles. He had been a doctor assigned to their company in the army, and he was the only one besides Sean who was clean shaven. Sean and Colin were close. Often when they set up camp, they would sleep next to each other. When they stayed in hotels, they would share a room.
There was Eoinn, who led the group. He was quiet and steady, and when he spoke, the other men simply did as he said without ever questioning him. He had dark, straight hair that hung almost to his shoulders and a dark mustache that he would stroke and tug on as he considered a course of action. Sam had thought of Eoinn as tall… until Liam showed up.
Liam was very tall, strong and charming. But he was always disappearing for a day or two on various missions that were assigned to him by Eoinn. He had wild, auburn hair and long, scraggly sideburns, but he shaved his upper lip and chin periodically.
Angus and Egan, the Sullivan brothers that looked almost like twins, both had dark brown, curly hair and long reddish-brown beards in their late thirties or early forties. Angus was always busy with his hands, always fixing or making things, and he was deadly accurate with a throwing knife. He had the best head for business in the group, and when they had to buy supplies, he would take charge of negotiations. On the other hand, Egan was quiet and let Angus speak for him for the most part. Still, when Egan spoke, all the men stopped to listen. Sam soon realized that Egan was very smart, perhaps a genius. He also had a very dry sense of humor. At first she didn’t understand when he was making jokes, but as time went by, she noticed that the other men would chuckle quietly sometimes when he spoke. As the weeks passed, she started to understand his pointed comments and find the humor in them.
Last of all, Finn was the oldest, with white hair laced with bright, red streaks, bushy eyebrows, and a short, white and red beard. While his hair was turning white, he couldn’t have been older than fifty. Finn was cranky, always grumbling and complaining, finding fault with everyone’s work. But nobody ever took him seriously, and Sam noticed that despite his constant complaining, he was the hardest worker. She realized that he would always lend a hand when someone was struggling to get something done. He was usually the first one up and would get the fire going and make the meals. Beyond that, he was always aware of where everything was across all the men’s packs. Sam came to understand that his complaining was like a reflex for him, and the other men always teased him, what they called, ‘taking the piss’.
The men were all Irish. They had all grown up in the same village in the Irish countryside and came to America on the same boat years ago. When the war broke out, they’d answered the call to serve in the Union Army, and miraculously, they had all avoided significant injury despite seeing plenty of fighting.
One night over the campfire, Sam’d asked Sean where they were from in Ireland, and he had said, “A village called Sedennan, near the town of Omagh.” But he implied that they’d left Ireland a long time before coming to America, that they’d gone over to Europe for some time. She tried to sort out how that could be true, since Sean seemed to be about twenty-five years old.
They’d spent most of the summer riding across the West looking for a place to set up a mining camp. There was no shortage of places to stake claims, but Eoinn had very specific things he was looking for in a place to set up his mining operation. One morning over breakfast Sam asked Eoinn about it. “Sir,” she said, “it’s been months since I joined you, and we’ve been to many towns, camps, and claims without once picking up a pan or doing any mining whatsoever. What is it that you’re looking for?”
Eoinn was quiet for a moment, then he said, “For many a year, I’ve been in search of a spot to call home, with most precise notions on its requirements. Security and sanctuary are paramount. I have a dream of a community where everyone works for a common set of goals. The main one of these goals being to live together in peace and by working together to achieve prosperity. This is known as an ‘intentional community’ to many, and that is my goal. To that point, I want to find a place where we might establish mines akin to those we’d built back home, or rather our forebears had. And then to bring all our families to live with us.”
That was the same day they’d ridden into Missoula Mills, the last town east of the Bitterroot mountains on the Mullan Military Road between Fort Benton and Walla Walla. The town was small, including most notably the Worden & Co. Mercantile and roughly another dozen buildings. For the most part, it was a tent-town with another twenty or so white tents hosting people and businesses. Sean told her that things had been mighty busy on the Mullan Road a few years ago with miners going west and east. But things had slowed in the last few years. Still, the townsfolk believed that business could pick up any time, perhaps as soon as another find started a stampede. A “stampede” is what they called it when men would swarm like bees over the wilderness looking for gold, silver, and jewels.
They rode up to the Worden & Company Mercantile, which was a small building made from wide boards with a wood-shingled roof. They tied off their horses, and the whole group went inside — except for Finn, who stayed outside because he didn’t want to be “shoved and stepped on by ye great oafs.”
The interior of Worden & Company Mercantile was absolutely wondrous to Sam’s eyes. Every inch of the place was covered in things to buy. Even the ceiling rafters were hung with all sorts of goods. The building smelled of spices and smoked meats. Sam was free to wander the aisles, fingering fabrics and cooking supplies. She saw on the counters that there were pickles, spices, candies, and crackers, some in jars, some in bottles, and some in paper wrappers. Hams and jerky hung from the ceilings alongside dried herbs. A sign read that potatoes and onions were available. A crate marked cheese had a wheel of dry, hard cheese sitting on top, with slices laid out for tasting. Long candies of many colors stood upright in a clear, glass jar.
Behind the counter a man and woman engaged with the various customers, answering questions and ringing up sales. He was handsome, short in height with a long beard and receding hairline, light brown in color. Likewise, the woman was beautiful, with glossy, black hair, wavy and carefully combed, parted down the middle, and pulled back in a bun at the back of her head. Her dress was lovely and reflected the latest Eastern styles. It was a deep, almost purplish red. The fabric was shiny, and it had a corseted waist, flaring out below the woman’s hips.
Angus and Egan promptly approached the woman with a list of the supplies that were needed by the group. She glanced at the list, and she walked around the store helping them locate the items. Eoinn was deeply engaged in conversation with the man, who he addressed as Frank and greeted as if he were an old friend. The woman they called Lu, and she was clearly Frank’s wife. She saw Frank pass Eoinn a letter, and Eoinn raised his eyebrows in surprise. He thanked Frank and stepped outside to read it in the sunlight.
Sean surprised Sam by tapping her shoulder. When she turned, he handed her a long, thin stick of candy. “Oooh,” she said, “may I taste it?” He said, “Of course, I bought it for ye, lass. Ye can eat it all now, or ye can have some now, and save the rest for later.”
The woman Lu watched Sam from behind the counter, smiling at her. Sam carefully tore the top of the paper wrapper off the stick of candy, and she put the one-inch long top in her mouth.
She smiled excitedly at Sean and Lu, and said, “Ooh, it’s sweet, and spicy, and smells like flowers!”
Lu chuckled and said, “That’s an Elderflower candy. We also have ginger candy, lavender, sarsaparilla, and butterscotch.”
Sean bustled Sam out of the store, but behind them the other men were buying sweets for Sam as surprises for later.
I I I I
In the cabin, Barney sat in front of the stove. A pang of grief twisted in his chest — he missed his brother, and he missed his wife and daughter back in Chicago. He regretted coming out here.
He’d saved about a hundred dollars in six months of mining. It was barely enough to get him back home — and it was nowhere near what he and Hank had spent coming out. Between them, they’d sunk a few hundred dollars into travel and supplies. He had a bag of garnet crystals weighing nearly twenty pounds, but he had no idea what they were really worth. The hundred he’d made had come from the sale of a similar bag, but the assayer had said the stones’ value all depended on quality. He wasn’t broke, but he sure as hell wasn’t getting ahead either. None of the riches he’d imagined had shown up.
The tin plate rested between his bony knees. He sopped up the last of the broth from his beans and salt pork with the hard, stale bread he’d baked just after Hank died. Their placer mining was steady, but it had yielded only garnets and flecks of gold too small to matter. He knew he’d have to make the decision to leave soon — summer was fading, and Joe warned they’d have twenty feet of snow by Thanksgiving.
Hank had been paranoid about food stores, so Barney knew he wouldn’t starve if he chose to stay. They had enough to feed an army. But his heart wasn’t in it. Hank was buried out behind the cabin, near the edge of the ravine. Barney’s dream had died with his brother. He was lonely, sad, and tired of pretending otherwise. He missed his brother. He missed his family.
He wanted to go home.
As Barney finished his pork and beans, the sun dipped lower in the sky. He scraped out his bowl, then paused at the sound of mules braying. Stepping outside, he made his way toward the rope bridge to check on them in their pen across the ravine.
Halfway there, he stopped. Several men stood on the far side, watching him. His chest tightened, a small pang of panic pinched his heart, but after a moment’s study, he relaxed. They looked all right. A few wore remnants of Union blues, bits of insignia and coat trim, familiar signs. He and Hank had worn the same.
Barney raised a hand in greeting. One of the men stepped onto the bridge. There were eight of them in all — seven men and a boy of about ten, climbing on the mule pen fence, studying the animals with open curiosity. Barney felt a flicker of relief that only one man was crossing. He was proud of that bridge. It had taken a lot of work, and he was pleased to see how easy the crossing looked.
The man stepped off the bridge on this side of the ravine, rubbed his hands, and stretched his back as he politely waited for Barney to approach.
He stood tall, just over six feet, with long, dark hair. He wore a waxed duster, leather gloves, and a wide-brimmed hat pulled low. A long mustache framed his face. There was something familiar about him. Then Barney realized that he had met this man before. He was one of Hank’s friends from the War, a name Hank had spoken often, always with respect.
The man stripped off his glove and extended his hand. His grip was firm.
“Eoinn Seeley, at your service,” he said. His voice held an Irish lilt, deep and refined, almost noble.
“Barney Randall, sir,” Barney said, gripping his hand. “We met after Gettysburg. You came with Hank to see me in the infirmary. It’s good to see you again, sir. What can I do for you?”
Seeley nodded, standing calm and still. He had the quiet weight of someone used to command.
“My men and I have been traveling from back East. We’re looking to do some mining. I’d heard from your brother Hank, back in Missoula Mills, that ye were up here. We’ve kept in touch over the last few years. I knew he was heading this way, but I hadn’t heard where he’d ended up. He left word for me at the Worden & Company Mercantile. His note said a few other men had set up claims on this plateau, but that there might be room for more. Is your brother nearby?”
Barney looked down at his feet, then over toward Hank’s grave. He cleared his throat, his voice cracking under the weight of his grief. “He is nearby. My dear brother Hank — may the Lord hold him in His embrace — died just last week. A mere cut while panning and it festered. Lockjaw. Five days and he was gone. Before that misfortune, our days were joyful, preparing for winter.”
“Damn,” said Seeley, his voice low. “That pains me dearly to hear, Mr. Randall. I was sore looking forward to seeing your brother again. We spent many an hour talking about life after the War, and how we’d hoped to live it. He was a good man — steady and strong. A true friend. It’s a tragedy.”
Barney nodded, eyes welling. “From time to time, Hank spoke of you, Colonel Seeley. I didn’t know you were still in contact — or that he’d left word for you. He esteemed you highly…” He choked on the words and looked away, struggling to regain his composure.
Seeley placed a hand on Barney’s shoulder and the two men stood there in silence. There were tears in Seeley’s eyes too — a shared sorrow for the loss of a good man.
Seeley took a deep breath and let his gaze sweep across the land, right to left, studying the contours in silence. This flat stretch was something of an alpine valley, cut through by the deep ravine. The cove of land stretched nearly two miles deep and just over two miles wide, bordered by two sharp peaks with a third rising farther back. Between them ran the ravine — silver water winding through stone far below.
On the far side, where his men waited with the horses near the mule pen, the ground flattened for a mile before climbing steeply into forest. The trail they’d followed to the camp had been narrow, weaving through a grove of ancient cedars that towered over the path like a cathedral. It was a place that quieted men — primeval, still, powerful, and somehow removed from the world beyond.
This side of the ravine offered a broad curve of level ground. Four cabins stood apart, spaced along the flats in the shadow of the ridge. Several cold, clear springs emerged from the base of the mountain, feeding slender creeks that threaded through the basin. One stream ran toward them, then bent right, dropping into the ravine in a thin, steady, sparkling fall.
He could feel the throb of the earth here. It pulsed with life and deep, old energy. He could almost sense where deposits of ore lay hidden beneath the mountain, where gems might wait in silence. This was the place he had hoped for, longed for — and here it stood. Real. He felt a deep desire to own this place.
Seeley took in every detail but said nothing. His eyes lingered on the lines of slope and stone, the lay of the water, the cabins, the way the light fell on the grass at this hour. His face remained unreadable, but something in his stillness carried weight.
He exhaled slowly.
“My men and I are seeking a stake,” he said, voice measured. “With time, if fortune favors us, we hope to bring our families west. We aren’t chasing gold dust from one canyon to the next. We’re looking for a place we might keep for generations. For a home.”
He turned slightly toward Barney. “I’ve long watched experiments around the world of the development of intentional communities, where a sense of community, safety, and cooperation rule the day. A utopian dream. Your brother’s note suggested your group had made some headway here. And perhaps, after a season’s labor, some among ye might consider selling a claim.”
There was no press to the words, no demand. Just a quiet invitation.
The sincerity in Seeley’s voice was unmistakable. Barney could sense the man’s yearning for a stable life, for a future for his family. His heart hammered in his chest, a mix of fear and hope. Even before Hank’s death, some of the men had begun to question the venture. The gold hadn’t come easily. Lately, even Joe had spoken of returning East. It was as if the infusion of companions had broken through the hard crust of his need for solitude.
And now these newcomers stood at the edge of their clearing, calm and capable — and here, perhaps, to stay.
Seeley paused to gauge Barney’s interest. Barney’s mind raced. The idea of leaving felt both a relief and a betrayal of Hank’s memory. But the thought of home — of his wife and daughter — tugged at his heart. This offer felt like a lifeline tossed to a drowning man.
“We’d be willing to pay a fair sum,” Seeley said, “if what ye’ve done so far looks promising. Some of us come from a long line of miners in the old country. We’d love a spot like this to try our hand again.”
Barney sighed, weariness in his voice. “Well, Mr. Seeley, I find myself at something of a crossroads. We’ve pulled garnets of good quality from the creeks. Gold’s been scarce — flecks here and there, the occasional nugget — but hardly enough to suggest fortune lies beneath. Silver’s shown itself too, though in modest quantity. The garnets hold promise. We’ve hoped that, with deeper digging and the proper tools, there might yet be something more. But the West is littered with dreams like ours — men chasing riches and finding only hardship.”
He paused, then added, “Your proposal offers a reprieve. And it’s heartening to hear that your mission is greater than the hunt for wealth alone.”
Seeley had listened closely, his eyes intent. There was a spark of interest in the details of the mining — not eagerness but something focused and alive behind his calm expression.
“That, Mr. Randall, carries the ring of promise to my ears. Our aspirations do stretch beyond mining alone. We seek a haven, a place where our families can live in peace. The West is beautiful, aye, but also lawless. After years of war, our hearts crave sanctuary. We desire a village, modest and well-tended, where our children might grow safely, where neighbors work together, and no man is left to fend for himself. A community built with intent, led for the common good. And this place — it may well be it.”
Barney believed him. There was no guile in Seeley’s voice, only a quiet conviction. It resonated with his own weariness, his longing for home. He looked toward the mountain, then down at his feet. After a moment, he said, “Mr. Seeley, upon reflection, it seems you may indeed have stumbled upon your refuge. With Hank gone, my thoughts turn more and more toward Chicago. I believe others may feel the same.”
Seeley’s expression softened. “Sir, my heart weighs heavy at the loss of your brother. He was a cherished friend. On behalf of my men, many of whom know the sting of loss, let me assure ye — your decision to return home casts no shadow upon your character. We’ve all said goodbye to people we loved. That sorrow drives us, as well.”
Barney nodded, then looked out toward the distant cabins. His mind lingered on the faces of the other men, each of them holding his own quiet dreams and disappointments.
“As for the others,” Barney said, “I dare not speak for them. But it’s fair to say they’re as green to mining as Hank and I were. The summer’s been fair, this place has a kind of peace to it, but the winter is another matter. I imagine with winter looming, with its isolation and daunting snows, it might well change some hearts.”
He hesitated, then added by way of a warning, “The man who found this place survived a winter here. He said by Thanksgiving the snow stood twenty feet deep in the passes. Mining, especially placer work, becomes near impossible. There’s been talk of leaving before the snows come. If you were to offer terms that helped them recover their stake and get out in comfort, I think you might well strike a deal.”
Seeley nodded, thoughtful. His gaze drifted across the land again, distant but deliberate. “Thank ye, Mr. Randall. We’ll make certain your companions are treated fairly. It’s not merely claims we seek, but a foundation. For a future worth building.”
The challenges of mining in this rugged terrain were not lost on Eoinn. The Bitterroot Mountains were as treacherous as they were promising. The region’s history was littered with tales of hardship. His experience in the War had taught him the value of preparation and resilience. Success here would demand careful planning, technological innovation, and a steadfast commitment to the community’s vision. Eoinn and his men were determined to apply their disciplined approach and see it through.
He asked if they could corral their horses with the mules and set up camp. The request was met kindly, and once the plan was settled, Seeley crossed back over the bridge to relay it. The men settled the horses, then used the basket to pass their saddlebags, and crossed one by one behind him.
Barney showed them a good spot to set up for the night — a place where earlier arrivals had made camp. Then he went to speak with the other miners, hoping to gather them for a meeting. They usually came together once a fortnight to share some whiskey and company. Since Hank’s passing, they hadn’t done so.
Over the next few days, Seeley and his men met with each of the miners one-on-one. The conversations weren’t without hesitation. Joe, in particular, was cautious — questioning the newcomers’ intentions, weighing the worth of what they’d found. But one night of shared stories and a bottle of whiskey softened his heart. It also helped that Seeley had many stories of Hank to share.
Four days after their arrival, the newcomers had reached agreements with each of the men. Seeley’s group made a strong impression — quiet, steady, and full of grit. But more than that, they were good men. They’d taken in a young orphan and spoke little but worked hard. The miners felt comfortable passing along their efforts to hands like these.
None of them got rich, but when they gathered together afterward, they spoke openly of relief. There was satisfaction in the terms and a strange peace in letting go. They would return home with heads high — their unfulfilled dreams lightened by the promise of something new.
As the men packed their belongings onto the mules across the ravine, Barney lingered at Hank’s grave. The wind carried the scent of pine, and the low murmur of the creek reached his ears. A bittersweet pang rose in his chest, knowing a part of him would remain here, buried with his brother. But in his heart, he carried the hope of home.
I I I I
12th September, 1867
To: John A. Roebling
From: Eoinn Seeley
Dear John,
It’s been some time since we met for a fine dinner in Cincinnati and discussed our compatible visions for utopian communities. I have thought of that evening often as my friends and I made our way across this beautiful country. We have made our settlement within the Idaho Territory, a week’s travel from Missoula Mills in the Montana Territory. I’ve included an address where you can send your correspondence. We have found a promising location to set up our village, and the mining endeavors have proven most fruitful. We almost feel bad for having bought out the claims of the men who were here, as we quickly found much more than they’d achieved in a season of mining.
I thought of you immediately when I found the location for the mines that my men and I have hoped to put in place. It is a beautiful situation, a flat spot between three peaks — a cove of land two miles by two miles across, at some three thousand feet of altitude in the Bitterroot Mountains. The primary peak rises some six thousand feet to the east, and the secondary to some five thousand to the north, the third to about four thousand to the south, with a ridgeline to the west at about five thousand feet. There is good hunting for deer, elk, and bighorn sheep, and plenty of small birds, with grouse of three types and doves being quite plentiful in season. No bears or cougars have made their territory here.
There is fresh water aplenty, with sweet springs that gurgle and pool delightfully. To our great excitement, there is a wonderful hot spring that smells not of sulfur but faintly of iodine, with waters at the exit point just over 120 degrees Fahrenheit. It drops significantly by the time it reaches the first of the pools, such that it is just tolerable, and by the third pool is like bath water. The skies here are clearer than anywhere I’ve been, and the atmosphere is most wonderful. The weather has turned colder these last few days, and from what we’ve been told by the previous inhabitants, we can expect plenty of snow by Thanksgiving, apparently above the top of the existing cabins!
I write to you in part because there is an interesting engineering problem you may be able to help address. The approach to this cove of land is very passable, easily covered by foot, horse, or mule. With only minor improvements it could handle wagons. With an eye to the future, a light-gauge railroad to haul supplies and ore is not out of the question. However, the final approach to the cove is separated from the passable terrain by a ravine with a one hundred foot drop, and about seventy five feet across.
The sides of the ravine are stable and firm, but the current arrangement means leaving horses and mules on the far side. The current traverse is of a simple rope bridge with planks and a pulley system for carrying goods. This obviously will not do for the long term. I have, as always, an eye toward the future. My hope is for my men to bring their families to settle here, and as you know, my Rose is eager to join me as well. But I cannot imagine women and children using such a contraption on a regular basis. I do also have in mind the hauling of larger volumes of ore and supplies, both in and out of the village.
I’ve included drawings of the ravine and of the approach and landing on each side. For obvious reasons, I do not include any sort of map, but we are a full week’s trip by foot from Missoula Mills, at least given current conditions. Improvements to the trail, leading in time to a proper road, could reduce this journey considerably. If you have any thoughts on a design for a bridge that might more permanently straddle this gap, I would be sincerely grateful. I’d like to erect some kind of wooden structure at the outset, but over time, I imagine a beautiful stone and iron span — like those drawings you once showed me for your ideas in bridge design.
I am well aware of the considerable engineering prowess such a task demands. That is why my thoughts turned immediately to you, whose expertise in such matters is unparalleled. The successful construction of such a bridge would not only mark a significant advancement in our mining operations, but also ensure the safety and well-being of our families, including my dear Rose, who is ever so eager to join me in this splendid isolation.
I await your esteemed guidance with great anticipation and extend my sincerest thanks in advance for your consideration of my request. Please keep all of this in the strictest confidence. Even a rumor of what I’ve said could cause a stampede of miners, as has happened too often in the West.
Sincerely,
Eoinn Seeley
Return correspondence at the Worden & Co. Mercantile, Missoula Mills, Montana
I I I I
15th October, 1867
From: John Roebling
To: Eoinn Seeley
My dear friend Eoinn,
It was indeed a source of great joy to receive your letter, the first in many months. I find myself ensconced in Cincinnati, and your news from the distant western wilds, detailing the commencement of your ambitious, utopian village in the mountains, has filled me with profound satisfaction. As you well remember, my own endeavors at an intentional community outside Philadelphia did not culminate as I had anticipated. Perhaps, the secluded location you have selected shall prove to be the requisite solution. My son, Washington, extends his heartfelt regards and well wishes to you.
Upon perusing your drawings, I have devised several sketches for a temporary as well as a permanent bridge. The temporary construction, entirely of wood, is designed for the solitary passage of individuals and livestock. I must emphatically advise against its use for large groups of people or multiple horses simultaneously. The permanent bridge, envisioned in stone and steel, awaits our collaborative efforts to procure the necessary steel for the span. Although I believe local sources can suffice for the stone, I implore you to consider the long-term stability of the ravine’s banks with great care. My absence from the site precludes me from offering a design guaranteed to endure through the ages.
I eagerly await updates on your progress and the opportunity to lend my assistance. The prospect of beholding the permanent bridge in person is one I cherish. However, my recent proposal for a suspension bridge in New York, connecting southern Manhattan and Brooklyn, has been accepted. Preparations for my relocation to New York are underway. This endeavor will undoubtedly occupy nearly all of my time, yet I harbor hope that upon its completion, I may visit your mountainous village. Washington and I, having deliberated upon your letter, agree that the proposed design offers the optimal solution for stability. Given the presumed steadiness of the ravine’s sides and the logistical advantages provided by your remote location, we believe our design will minimize the requisite quantity of steel to complete the project.
With sincere regards,
John A. Roebling
— END of Chapter 3 —
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